katekat: (xander - chagrin)
katekat ([personal profile] katekat) wrote in [personal profile] lunabee34 2010-02-22 08:37 am (UTC)

Wow - I had a feeling if you were going to tackle this pairing you were going to *tackle* it, and you totally did. Proverbial body slam. It fits so perfectly that you used Ben/Glory's brain-messing as the device that simultaneously begins the interlude and then takes everything away. Evil evil and wonderful twist at the end. I kind of feel for Ben, and I think you do too, imagining the monsters at his windows in his childhood is such a humanizing moment. This was a delightful and all together unexpected read.

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